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So Long, Goodbye by ~JoBz:iconJoBz:



There's A lot about me you don't know
there's a lot that you don't want to
there's a lot of things im not proud of
and I hate what I put you through

But when I close my eyes
I can see the way you looked at me so long ago
And if you'd let me try
I know i could make things the way they used to be
So just close your eyes
take my hand and don't let go I'll lead you through
And we'd be alright
but how can you forgive what I have done to you?
I guess you can't

We spent so much time together
and we used to be so happy
and ive avoided telling you this
cause I dont want to sound sappy

But when I close my eyes
I can see the way you looked at me so long ago
And if you'd let me try
I know i could make things the way they used to be
So just close your eyes
take my hand and don't let go I'll lead you through
And we'd be alright
but how can you forgive what I have done to you?
I guess you can't

Theres a lot of things I said to you
That i wish i could take back now
But there is one thing I never said
and its simply that I love you

But when I close my eyes
I can see the things I did to you so clearly now
And if you'd let me try
Id probobly fail you again, like I always do
So just close your eyes
shed no tears and just give me the brutal truth
It will be alright
I'll walk away with just three words I swear to you
So long, Goodbye
©2007-2009 ~JoBz
:iconjobz:

Author's Comments

This kind of just came to me tonight, Im wired on caffiene talking to some people and boom, there it was. Im hoping this means that I'm out of this lack of crativity thing ive been in for a while...but who knows.

I labeled it as Open Poetry, but i do have a way in my head for it to be sung as a song. Oh well.

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:iconpsychokiller-lady:
oooooooooh do you have music in ur head for it?
tis good dude, it took me till the third verse to realize that it was a song. lol
i was wondering how comes there was a repeated verse....

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:iconjobz:
Lol...bit slow tonight are we? :P

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:iconlegash:
kool poem dude.

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The Fifth of November
The gunpowder treason and plot
I know of no reason why the gunpowder treason
Should ever be forgot


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:iconpsychokiller-lady:
mhm.... meh

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:iconjobz:
lol

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:iconjobz:
thanks much :D

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:iconsmirnoffalicious:
i have no words.....its simply beautiful

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:iconjobz:
thanks so much Alia :)

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:iconsmirnoffalicious:
welcome jay :D

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